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This took about 45 minutes (the eyes took like 20 minutes), i think it turned out really good!

Hope u like my Weirdo!!!

* This is not Ami!!! *

Update: edited the hair
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Critique by *HiddleBitch Oct 8, 2011, 11:40:11 PM
The eyes are a little uneven, the lips are a little scary..
the border around the head is too thick, and its a little wobbly.... and the hair ties dont make much sense..
all in all, i think you have a Looooonngg way to go.
you should try to look at pictures online and use them for references, and ask anyone around you as you draw for a bit of feedback on certain things so it comes out better with the finished product.

anyway, thanks for reading this... i know it may seem a little harsh, but i really do think you need to work harder.
xx holy-tetris
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Critique by *Takkaia Sep 11, 2011, 1:04:18 PM
I have just a little advice for you for your art in general. From what your picture looks like, I'm guessing that you use the fill tool. this is why you get those weird pixel-y white lines bordering your other lines. Since the program that you are using has layer capability, I would suggest drawing the lines and then making a completely new layer for the colors UNDERNEATH the lines, and then coloring it by hand instead of using the fill tool. I know that this is much more time consuming, but it will give you much better results. Happy drawing!
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!IcyGiroro Nov 1, 2011
45 minutes for the picture and 20 minutes for the eyes? Looks kinda like you did this in 5 minutes. :unimpressed:

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~utauloids110 Sep 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I really really like it!!!! Do you use a mouse or a tablet?

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=ParanormalAuthor Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
mouse

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~utauloids110 Sep 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Wow that is really really good for a mouse!!!

I suck at using a mouse.

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=ParanormalAuthor Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
yeah i want a tablet

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~utauloids110 Sep 11, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Me too! I may get one for Christmas though!

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=ParanormalAuthor Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
cool

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*DestinyDecade Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. You're getting better.

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=ParanormalAuthor Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
i used the eyes i only use for traditional art so i think it turned out good

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*DestinyDecade Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. I can tell you'll improve. :)

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